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Dangerous Indulgences: An Erotic Story for Women - Victoria Lawson

Rating 1 out of 5 stars. 

 

Dangerous Indulgences is in desperate need of an editor. There are several basic grammar and punctuation errors that have no business being there. With that being said, even after all is corrected, DI is for me a 2 star read at best.

 

The main lead's been cheated on and her mode of revenge is going to her ex-boyfriend's home and having senseless sex with him, then leaving before he can reach climax. I'm not sure how this even constitutes getting even *smh*

 

The female lead then realizes she wants to explore her fantasies and picks up a random guy at a club. The guy ends up falling hard for her after they have sex in the alley and he's on board fulfilling all her sexual fantasies. *le sigh* 

 

 

Dangerous Indulgences features: 

 

  • erotica
  • oral sex
  • menage
  • f/m/f
  • f/f
  • exhibitionism
  • revenge
  • quick read